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	<title>Comments on: I&#8217;m Stuck On A Query &#8211; Ask Anne, the Pro Writer</title>
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		<title>By: Anne Wayman</title>
		<link>http://www.everyjoe.com/articles/im-stuck-on-a-query-ask-anne-the-pro-writer-15/comment-page-1/#comment-345834</link>
		<dc:creator>Anne Wayman</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 30 Aug 2008 20:34:23 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Thanks Mark... looks good</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thanks Mark&#8230; looks good</p>
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		<title>By: Mark Silver</title>
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		<dc:creator>Mark Silver</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 30 Aug 2008 19:04:21 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I would actually recommend wandering over to www.thefluentself.com Havi Brooks is an expert on destuckification. Amazing work, she does.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I would actually recommend wandering over to <a href="http://www.thefluentself.com" rel="nofollow">http://www.thefluentself.com</a> Havi Brooks is an expert on destuckification. Amazing work, she does.</p>
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		<title>By: creativeblogger</title>
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		<dc:creator>creativeblogger</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 30 Aug 2008 09:30:43 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Hi there, 

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		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hi there, </p>
<p>As a writer and marketer I thought you may like to know about this new site where you can promote yourself, your services and have links to your site completely free, no sign ups.</p>
<p>Whether you are a beginner or a pro this offer is open to you. You can post a bio which includes a sample piece of your writing, picture and links to your writing sites.</p>
<p>This service is completely free, requires no registration or sign up and is easy to apply. If you want clients and readers to know more about you what have you have you got to lose?</p>
<p>Check out the site and make the most of what it offers. We all need a break and every little bit helps.</p>
<p>Full Details</p>
<p><a href="http://www.find-writer.blogspot.com" rel="nofollow">http://www.find-writer.blogspot.com</a></p>
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		<title>By: Anne Wayman</title>
		<link>http://www.everyjoe.com/articles/im-stuck-on-a-query-ask-anne-the-pro-writer-15/comment-page-1/#comment-345833</link>
		<dc:creator>Anne Wayman</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 29 Aug 2008 19:18:04 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Sounds like that would work Hayli... anyone else with a different approach?</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Sounds like that would work Hayli&#8230; anyone else with a different approach?</p>
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		<title>By: Hayli</title>
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		<dc:creator>Hayli</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 29 Aug 2008 18:57:31 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I would recommend making an outline for the feature article. This helps break what is probably a long paper down into salient points that are more digestable (for the reader AND writer)! Do point I and sub-points A, B, C, then point II... much as with a speech. Really, a feature article is like a speech - keep it simple, interesting and not too long. You just don&#039;t have to maintain eye contact or picture your audience in their underwear! Good luck!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I would recommend making an outline for the feature article. This helps break what is probably a long paper down into salient points that are more digestable (for the reader AND writer)! Do point I and sub-points A, B, C, then point II&#8230; much as with a speech. Really, a feature article is like a speech &#8211; keep it simple, interesting and not too long. You just don&#8217;t have to maintain eye contact or picture your audience in their underwear! Good luck!</p>
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